Once upon a time there was a girl called cinderella. She lived with her parents but one day her mum died.Cinderella’s dad said cinderella is alone so he married a Woman who had two daughters. They said to cinderella you’re too beautiful and they’re jealous so they said to Cinderella you’re gonna do all the chores .Cinderella name wasn’t Cinderella it was another name.
One day the Prince send a message to the whole kingdom can go to the ball including her stepsisters .Cinderella asked to her stepmum can I go to the ball and she laughed and she said no and I’m your mum and you’re not allowed to go because you gotta do all the cleaning work.
At that night cinderella dressed two of her stepsisters up in a Beautiful dress and they went to the ball .Cinderella went to the fire and cried. Suddenly the fairy godmother appear and asked her why are you crying. Because you can’t go to the ball reply fairy godmother. Then the fairy godmother said to Cinderella bring me a big pumpkin and she did. The fairy godmother turned the pumpkin into a beautiful carriage and she made a beautiful gown for Cinderella. The fairy godmother was warned Cinderella at 12 midnight you all turn back to a regular girl So you need to make sure to come back before midnightand off Cinderella went.
When she arrived at the ball the Prince let her in and they dance together until midnight. Suddenly Cinderella remember about the warning so she went off back into the carriage and safely sat on a chair and be next to the fire. Then her stepsisters arrived home. Her stepsisters said to Cinderella there’s gonna be a second ball. The next day the fairy godmother appeared again and made the dress and she warn cinderella again and she made the courage off she went.
The Princelet in Cinderella and they danced until midnight then Cinderella notice about the warning so cinderella walked off the stairs and she left her glass slipper shoe. The Prince was looking for her. The Prince only found one glass slipper. The next day the Prince went to every house to find Cinderella. When the prince arrived the Cinderella house Cinderella was locked in the attic. Her stepmum found her glass slipper . The Prince asked her stepmum that do you have anyone that could fit this glass slipper and she replied yes. The step mum let her children try to fit the glass slipper on but it didn’t fit on them.
Cinderella was still locked in the attic. The prince asked to Cinderella stepmother is there anyone else she said no. Cinderella shouted help help and a prince heard Cinderella so they opened the door and they found Cinderella. They llet her fit the Glass slipper and it fitted. The prince took Cinderella to the castle and got married . They live happily ever after.
Hey Myu San,
ReplyDeleteYou have come such a long way in your learning. I love your retell story of Cinderella and Myu San I love, love love some of the "descriptive words" you have used. Well Done you!
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Thank you Miss Davis for your comment.This is my longest story ever.It took nearly 2 hours.My mum help me to put the paragraph.
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