Monday 15 November 2021

Rapunzel writing

Once upon a time there lived two people who are a woman and a man who lived in the house. They had a garden but it wasn’t theirs it was owned by a old witch. It had a plant called Rapunzel.

One day the man’s wife said I really want to eat the Rapunzel because I am pregnant. That night the man went into the garden and pick some Rapunzel leaves. The other night the man went into the garden again and then pick some leave but then he saw the old witch and asked him what are you doing in my garden. The man said I need the fleas because my wife is pregnant. Then the old witch said you can have many as you want but on one condition you gotta give me your baby in return.

Then they give the baby she called the baby Rapunzel then she went to a big long tower and kept her in it. When Rapunzel was 12 she had big long hair. When the old witch said Rapunzel Rapunzel let down your golden hair so Rapunzel did then the old witch climbed up.

One day a prince saw the big tower and he heard Rapunzel singing he wanted to go inside but there was no stairs. Every day the prince keep on returning to hear Rapunzel‘s beautiful singing. The old witch came to the tower and said the words again and the Prince was hiding in a tree he found out the way he can get in . 

The next morning the Prince came to the tower and asked Rapunzel Rapunzel let down your golden hair and she did. She saw the prince and she was frightened but he had talk nicely and Rapunzel feel alright. Then he said we must get married Rapunzel replied I cannot get down if you get me flats I can make a ladder out of it.

Rapunzel told the old witch I saw A prince and a old witch was mad and she cut Rapunzel‘s hair . She put Rapunzel into a desert. When the prince came to the tower and he said the words again .The old witch put down Rapunzel hair and the prince climbed on. He saw the old witch. The old witch said you thought it was Rapunzel. Then the prince 

jumped out of the window.

The Prince walked sadly because Rapunzel was gone. When the prince arrive to the desert he found Rapunzel. And they got married and they lived happily ever after.

2 comments:

  1. This is a wonderful retell of the story Myu San! I love how you included all the important details about the beginning, middle and end of the story! How did you feel when Rapunzel was sent to the desert? Did you think the story would still have a happy ending?
    Keep being awesome!
    :-)
    Ms Gaston

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  2. Hi Myu San,
    I am so impressed with your retell of this traditional story about Rapunzel!
    You described what happened in correct sequence. I liked the way you have used paragraphs as well. Keep up the amazing learning at home.
    Take care, from Mrs Carter.

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